Dynasty cow

A message to the world , stop hunting dont move , mother firth said silently, the hunters . there here . the baby chicks stopped there squbbles over a worm ...

the story line was good , so was the setting but the opening was pretty long and dragged on . but thats only my opinion of supreme justice , yaks.

hallo , my name is Dynasty cow and i will be monetering your advancement and progresion in the work you send , as your personal feed back distributer , over ...

your a writer , right. how many books have you written so far. :shock: this was exelent like the gentle glow of the fire. Stuff from tolkien isnt better than ...

Message for black tamplar : youve got it .

All the assassins climbed at the signal, as before but faster . They arrived at the window, inside something impossible was taking place . The large room was tiled with ...

The leader made a sudden flick with left foot , the signal. Seven of the squad began to climb the castle walls . For any one who cared to look, ...

This was extremly hard to understand , so hard that i didint understand it. the discriptions were high class but you might of but too much , to make it ...

oh , that was just randomness

i loved the plot but it is hard to read ,and the bit about grazing yaks dosent do it any favours . i liked the hunters . i had an ...

This was good . i wouldent normally read somthing this long but this kinda grabs my attention . but there are quit efew stuff you hafto correct . not grammer ...

'An explosive adventure from bigging to end ' the times

can any one just read this and comment on the story and not on the mistakes , cause i havent masterd spell check yet

I kissed the troll , behind the scaly skin , two foot fangs and crushing hands lay a kind and gentle being , better than the man who had captured ...

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